Răspuns:
A day of my childhood
It was the last day of school. With hapiness I finished 6th grade. I said ''goodbye'' to my friends but in special to Mister guardian who I greated everyday. It wasn't much until the dance show organized for the end of the year, I waited this moment so much because I was going to perform , 2 different dances in different styles. I went to a relative so I could practice. The hours past pretty fast, that fast that I coulnd't realize when the day of the show came. I went ,,Hyperion'' teather. Every team performed it's choreography, even us. At the end everyone earned trophyes, dimplomas and sweets, then I went home enjoying this moment. This was my last day of 6th grade.
Explicație:
am schimbat un pic textul ca sa sune mai bine si ca sa-l pot traduce fara ajutor, am incercat sa-l fac cat mai corect gramatical si literal posibil.
cea mai mare schimbare ar fi faptul ca in loc sa zic ca orele au trecut destul de rapid incat a venit timpul spectacolului am spus ca orele au trecut destul de rapid , atat de rapid incat nu am realizat cand a venit ziua spectacolului.
daca mai ai nelamuriri nu-ti fie frica sa intrebi.
Succes la ora!
